Fic: Peter's Fall

[lostandalone22]

Title: Peter's Fall
Rating: PG
Pairing: Gen; Pre-series
Written for Week #29: It's the fall that'll kill you in [Bad username or site: @ livejournal.com]


Nathan cursed loudly as he watched Peter fall out of the tree backwards, his head smacking against the ground with a loud crack. He’d told him to stay out of that tree so many times, but Peter never listened. He just kept going up there, and now he was paying the price. Blood pooled around his head and he lay there so still.

He ran to him, wanting to hold him in his arms. Fighting down panic and leaning over Peter’s still body, Nathan screamed out for someone to help them, to call an ambulance. He was going to make sure Peter never climbed that tree again, even if he had to cut it down.

Comments

[malicat.livejournal.com]

OMG,what an horrible image o_O Poor Nathan,and poor little Peter :(

But great fic!

[bitterbird.livejournal.com]

oh no!! was peter ok? aww im worried now ><

omg thats the cutest icon ever!!!

nice story :D

[lostandalone22.livejournal.com]

Thanks! I'm glad you like the story. It is a horrible picture, but at least you know Peter was okay.

[lostandalone22.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I'm glad you like it. You know Peter's okay. This is pre-series, so you know that all roads must lead to Peter being who he is today. It's just a little bump in the road.

[bitterbird.livejournal.com]

yes thats true
i just worry coz i love him so :D
its a cute bump in the road
I like reading your Nathan/Peter stories.

[lostandalone22.livejournal.com]

Thank you! Yeah, I would definitely warn if it were something more that H/C. I don't like death fics too much (and, I worry for Peter, too).

[wenchpixie]

Oh lord, poor Nathan (and Peter). Lovely job babe.

[lostandalone22.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I'm happy you like it. I do so love torturing the boys.

[fresleyforever.livejournal.com]

That was really great and heart rendering. You captured the love that Nathan has for Peter perfectly!

[lostandalone22.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I'm happy you thought I captured Nathan's love.

[katikat.livejournal.com]

You are downright cruel today *sniff* That would deserve a full-length fic!

[dawnie1970.livejournal.com]

Oh noes, Peter! *cuddles him* Beautiful and angsty hon!

[lostandalone22.livejournal.com]

Thanks for reading! I don't mean to be! It just worked so perfectly. And, at least I'm not actually killing the boys. If I have time, I'll write it as a full fic.

[lostandalone22.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I'm so happy you like it. Peter so needs to be cuddled. Then again, he's kind of unconscious, so Nathan would need it more.

[dawnie1970.livejournal.com]

*cuddles Nathan* I have cuddles enough for everyone!

[lostandalone22.livejournal.com]

*cuddles you* Yes, you do, and that's what makes you so awesome!

[dawnie1970.livejournal.com]

*cuddles back* No, you are more awesome! ;P Hee!

[lostandalone22.livejournal.com]

You are more awesome, to infinity!

[dawnie1970.livejournal.com]

*pwned by infinity* D'oh! ^_^

[lostandalone22.livejournal.com]

Yep. And, you can't fight that one.